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Hope you like this next page! I changed the style a bit, gave the panels white margins around them, made the bubbles a bit more yielding to the art, and found a new scanning trick, so I'd love to get some input on this page and the general style, look, and feel of the comic. :3 Can't wait until the setting changes and I get to paint the palace, the dirt wall is getting a little annoying to paint each time. As always, thank you all for reading! ^^ You are my motivation, each of these pages takes anywhere from 7-10 hours to make, so I really appreciate your support.
Well, i have to say this is an amazing piece. Briliantly drawn and colored. The father on the last box looks like a cat, though. Maybe elongate the muzzle a little more, and change the eyes to look more dog like. They look like slitted cats eyes. ^^' The daughter's ears look a little too long in the second and fourth boxes, try shortening them just a little bit. But all in all, this is a very good piece of art. I cant wait for the next one! The suspense is killing me! You are such a good artist! You are a deviant art Master! (see my deviant ID for details)
Oh you right.Last week i was working on one page comic for my art class.I done speech bubbles in traditional but i was coloring comic with wooden pencils.You right it will be painful to draw whole page again just because watercolors messed edges of speech bubbles.
The daughter's ears look a little too long in the second and fourth boxes, try shortening them just a little bit. But all in all, this is a very good piece of art.
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