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Hope you like this next page! :D I changed the style a bit, gave the panels white margins around them, made the bubbles a bit more yielding to the art, and found a new scanning trick, so I'd love to get some input on this page and the general style, look, and feel of the comic. :3 Can't wait until the setting changes and I get to paint the palace, the dirt wall is getting a little annoying to paint each time.
As always, thank you all for reading! ^^ You are my motivation, each of these pages takes anywhere from 7-10 hours to make, so I really appreciate your support.

Art, comic, characters are all (c) to me.
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Critique by Bluestarfirejay Nov 7, 2012, 6:08:11 AM
Well, i have to say this is an amazing piece. Briliantly drawn and colored. The father on the last box looks like a cat, though. Maybe elongate the muzzle a little more, and change the eyes to look more dog like. They look like slitted cats eyes. ^^'
The daughter's ears look a little too long in the second and fourth boxes, try shortening them just a little bit. But all in all, this is a very good piece of art. :) I cant wait for the next one! The suspense is killing me! :O You are such a good artist! You are a deviant art Master! (see my deviant ID for details)
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RiverStarMontenegro Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why don't you draw speech bubbles in traditional and then add text in digital ?
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The bubbles would not look as clean, also I found that the watercolor would invade the edges of the bubbles and mess them up, it looks rough. >:
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RiverStarMontenegro Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh you right.Last week i was working on one page comic for my art class.I done speech bubbles in traditional but i was coloring comic with wooden pencils.You right it will be painful to draw whole page again just because watercolors messed edges of speech bubbles.
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Kitty-of-Doom524 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
Kitsune of Death,Kitty of Doom...holy crap
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cyanide-unicorn Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
I love what how you use watercolors: the flow of the fur and the texture of the background look amazing! Very lovely and quite suspenseful <3
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:iconwolffoxin:
wolffoxin Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! <33 :hug:
I'm so glad you like it~ >w<
I explored your gallery a bit btw, breathtaking works, watched~ :heart:
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ljsraksha Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I am in complete and utter aw. This is spectacular and it's amazing what you can do with watetcolors.
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:iconwolffoxin:
wolffoxin Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. :wow: That is super kind of you! <33 Thank you so much! :heart: :hug:
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ljsraksha Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Hey, you totally deserve it and your welcome!
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks X3 <333
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ljsraksha Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
<3
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*u*
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ljsraksha Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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TiamatHeart Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap:
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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TiamatHeart Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcocoglompplz:
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you~ <333 :glomp:
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TiamatHeart Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure and delight:iconbackhug:
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
<33 :hug:
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LoreleiGLAMBERT Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Wow.. That was awesome~ I'm going to force Sarah to read this! And I can't wait for the next page~
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha thank you so much~~ :hug:
Yes, good. >:D
Thank you again~ So glad you like it! :la:
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Deathsong666 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautifully drawn :)
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^ <3
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Deathsong666 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome!
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Carolina22 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gorgeous page
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~ <333 :hug:
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SandBladeRaider Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Do you use water color. The softness and detail of your art is beautiful.
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes I do. :> I use Staedtler watercolor pencils, then do a wash of water with a big brush, in fur using a small brush to shape the water for detail. :)
And thank you so much, this comment brought me so much happiness~ :hug:
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SandBladeRaider Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Your welcome. What do you expect when you have such a beautiful style? ^^
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you so much!
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Tanchie97 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist
This is going to be sooo amazing story,and omg,your talent<3
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much love, it means so much to me that you like my comic~ <333 :hug:
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Tanchie97 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist
I just love it<3 It's a great story<3
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank ya so much dearie~ <333 :hug:
Hehe, it hasn't even gotten to the good parts yet, wait until we get to the first 'drama bomb'. ;D
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Tanchie97 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist
Hng yeeesss,i can't wait for it to come x33<3
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha it's only about 10-20 (hard to estimate at this point, depends on how fast I pace this coming part :/) pages away, can't wait to draw it. <333 OwO
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Tanchie97 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist
Hehe,just take your time,I still like the first part. <3
And now you reminded me that I must finish another page of mine. D:
I haven't worked on it for so long. ^^;
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~ <333 c:
Yaaaay I can't wait to see it~ :heart:
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LonelyGingerWolf Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Where is she going???? I neeeeed to know :dummy:

More please!!! :meow:
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He. xD He is Shiva's father, so not a woman lol. XP
You will know soon. ;D :heart:
I am so glad you like my comic hun~ :hug:

I'm on it~ :D
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LonelyGingerWolf Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I confused Shiva with her dad XD Lol
And yay!!! :hooray:
Eveyone should like it, it's great!! And I'm saying this after only 3 pages XD
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha yeah they look similar. xD
:S <3333333
Omg I love you so much ;A; <3333 Just wow <333
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Goldheart247 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I love it I'm also doing a omicron but I'm waiting or the first few pages done before I start :)
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :hug: Also, thank you very much for joining the group! :tighthug:
That's probably a good idea, I was not thinking ahead so I didn't make a backlog. xD Oops. :p
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Goldheart247 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
lol im in love the comic and cant wait till you do more you should start selling the comics when there done i would buy them :)
when i get the first 5 pages im posting mine please read it when its done :)
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I will. :) It's my goal. :>
I will go and get some copies printed at the end of chap.1, just selling chap.1 as like mini book sort things, limited copies, then when the whole comic's done I will get it all printed up in a big fat comic book. :>
Yay~ Can't wait to read it! <3 What's it about? :3
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Goldheart247 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
its about two wolves from differant pack that have a pup becouse of this a huge war breaks out and thats all we have got to so far :)
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool~! :D
Try and plan ahead, think of and ending before you start or else you might end up changing your plot which confuses the readers. That's why it took me a year to get the plot sorted out. :D
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Goldheart247 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thats what we are workiing in to day
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome~ :)
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